number9dream
David Mitchell
2001, Random House
As I have not yet read any Haruki Murakami, I did not realize how much Mitchell emulates Murakami in number9dream. The Complete Review and the SF Chronicle, among others, have set me straight.
CR: "number9dream doesn't just invite comparison to Murakami Haruki's work, it demands it. Mitchell is obviously and openly following in the footsteps of the master. His characters, their concerns, and what happens to them are all Murikamiesque. The quirky occurrences, the strong but lost girls, the ominous forces all about are all pages out of Murakami's books. Everything one might find (and has found) in a Murakami-novel is there: "Goatwriter" tales interspersed in the story, Beatles-songs (and a lot of John Lennon), a few popular-literary titles, and even a diary from World War II."
SFC: "While Mitchell inserts an outright reference to Murakami's novel "The Wind- Up Bird Chronicle," the Murakami touch is also evident in the inclusion of dreams, stories within stories and other texts (a diary that details a secret Japanese mission during World War II, for instance), as well as in the structure of "Number9Dream." Essentially, it's a quest/pseudo-detective novel, much like Murakami's "Chronicle," Pynchon's "The Crying of Lot 49" and, more recently, Colson Whitehead's "The Intuitionist," in which a hero must decipher clues and make his way in a confusing not-what-it-seems world."
Although I can't speak to Murakami, I can I can be quite the mighty windbag regarding another author Mitchell is often compared to, Thomas Pynchon. Honestly though, I don't see that many simularities; other than the fact that they both can loosely be described as hysterical realists, I don't see too much that Pynchon and Mitchell have in common.
Here's the difference: Mitchell's strong suit is ventriloquism. Pynchon's strong suit is fucking your head the fuck up. For instance, let's compare quotes from Lot 49 and number9dream:
Pynchon: "She knew that the sailor had seen worlds no other man had seen if only because there was that high magic to low puns, because DT's must give access to dt's of spectra beyond the known sun, music made purely of Antarctic loneliness and fright. But nothing she knew would preserve them, or him."
Mitchell: "At what age did Anju and I learn the world is actually two: one outside, and one inside, which we call "imagination"? A stupendous discovery, you would have thought, but I have no memory of the day. For babies in the wombs, imaginings must be reality."
Now I'm not trying to slight either quote. I'm just saying that the Pynchon quote has a lot more interpretive leeway, so to speak. Or let me put it another way. If I ask "What in the hell did that freaking horn in Lot 49 stand for?" I'll get about 50 different answers. If I ask "What do Eiji's dreams tell us about the nature of consciousness?" I'll get 1, maybe 2 answers.
I don't mind it when a novel has the Certain Explicit Message it wants me to get. It's fine if it's a carefully wrought story designed to crescendo like a fine classical symphony. There's an art to doing that well and I give authors credit when they make it happen.
However, Mitchell is not writing that kind of book. As the Village Voice observed
A few years ago, David Grand and David Mitchell both dazzled the critics with Louse and Ghostwritten, debut novels that were classic examples of the phenomenon: conspicuous, hyper-inventive fiction that wears ambition and talent on its blurb-studded sleeve. . . . [number9dream] is show-offy fiction on a bad hair day. . . . But the novel is also a wild explosion of color and energy, amped up on action-packed set pieces and astute observations of contemporary Japanese society. Like a lot of flamboyant fictionalists, Mitchell's problem isn't a lack of imagination or intelligence, but an inability to curb his excesses.
That's harsh, but not inaccurate. In fact, I think this quote only gets one thing wrong about number9dream: Mitchell shouldn't be curbing his excesses, but embracing them.
Look, anyone who has read Mitchell knows that his books sound the way a Hierononymous Bosch painting looks. These aren't your classic realist tales of high drama. They're cartoons/video games/intense movies/manga. Wrapping up a tight little moral like a Christmas present doesn't suit the kind of book Mitchell writes at all. Mitchell is big. He is sprawling. He's a one-man out-of-control dynamo of literary energy. His books shouldn't mince around depositing little acorns of wisdom. That kind of thinking just doesn't fit Mitchell's writing at all. I keep wanting Mitchell to just let loose, to write something totally wacked out that I can gape at and read about 17 different ways, and quote to my friends with my little hands clasped over my heart.
Watching Mitchell work is like watching a movie crew with a $100 million special effects budget and the best and brightest computer dorks around spend all their time, money, and talent on making a real cool simulation of a car driving down a straight road at about 25 mph.
In all honesty, I actually liked number9dream better than Cloud Atlas. The Atlas was a great read (hell, both of them are great reads) but it seemed like, if anything, Mitchell was trying to pin down his meaning even more severly in novel #3. At least number9dream had some ambiguity, some room to squeak through competing arguments. Cloud Atlas basically puts you in a headlock and is like "Look, humanity is doomed to keep destroying itself in an ever-spirialing cycle of violence that only gets worse as technology gets better. Got it?!? GOT IT!!!?!!"
So basically, Cloud Atlas is even more obviously organized and regimented than number9dream. And what of novel #1, Ghostwritten? Well, according to the Guardian:
Despite its enormous ambition, however, it left some wondering how much of a novel it was. Each section was linked to its fellows only by fleeting, marginal appearances of characters from other sections; rather than any overarching narrative structure, the effect was one of spectral patterns interleaved, ripples interpenetrating in a pond. The reader was eventually given leave to suppose that the entire novel had been compiled by the sky-surfing, satellite-hopping electronic consciousness of its penultimate chapter. True to its title, Ghostwritten was a dazzling performance of authorial absence.
I think Mitchell's moving in the wrong direction.
And then, we get to something like this:
I found myself extremely reluctant to read David Mitchells's new novel number9dream. I had read and enjoyed 'Ghostwritten', his first novel, but felt strongly at the time that all those who heaped praise upon him had not read Haruki Murakami's novels and thus were unaware of just how much David Mitchell was looting from the Japanese author. Nevertheless I did enjoy the book and was prepared to forgive.
When number9dream was nominated for all kinds of literary prizes I thought the same phenomena was happening again. Allocades that should be given to Murakami are being awarded to Mitchell. Now I have read number9dream I seriously think that Mitchell should, at the very least be exposed for his blatant 'flattery".
number9dream is a mixture of Murakami's Norwegian Wood, South of the Border, and his latest Sputnik Sweetheart. Is this appropriation? If his novels had come out simultaneously with Murakami's work, then we could argue that both men are working the same vein and are entitled to similar reactions and characters and even stories. But Murakami has been writing for twenty years and his work has been out there all that time, available for all to read - aand clearly Mitchell has assimilated them - in detail. Conscious or unconsciously.
The Guardian (and others) also found Mitchell to be very heavily cribbing from Murakami. And let's not forget that reviews of Cloud Atlas remarked about the simularities of each of Mitchell's segments to various writers: #1--Melville, #2--Waugh, #3--Chandler, #4--Amis, #5--Dick/Blade Runner.
Mitchell seems a very odd writer. He is immensely apt at impersonating other writers, but I'm not exactly sure where the David Mitchell is in David Mitchell's works. I suppose the best place to find him is in his novels' structure. They're all structured through coincidences and implied links, and I think this is where Mitchell is his strongest. Who/What is it that makes these stories connect? What does this format say about story-telling? Is this the literary equivalent of hip-hop's borrowing from multiple genres to fuse together a single song?
Perhaps the best thing about number9dream is that the many coincidences are left unexplained. It is undeniable that they are there and that someone left them there for a reason, but there is not nearly enough explication (something Mitchell tends to overdose on) or evidence to figure out exactly why. I hope that Mitchell's next novel leaves more ambiguities like this and takes less pains to spell everything out so clearly. Otherwise, his books will end up being the literary equivalent of the panopticomic repressive state that he paints so dreadfully well in his novels.